This is awesome! I love the little snapshot quality of it, how it gives us just enough insight into their lives together.
Over the last six months, that was one of the things that had surprised her: how he could go from a whirlwind of action to perfect stillness at a moment's notice.---That is such a perfect description of Jack. I wish I'd written that. Excellent!!
Their cute banter about what she's wearing tomorrow has me grinning like a total fool. I love her teasing him and him liking it. I love how he knows she's actually not gonna wake him up for two or three hours. They're both so selfless it kills me!
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Date: 2011-01-12 01:51 am (UTC)Over the last six months, that was one of the things that had surprised her: how he could go from a whirlwind of action to perfect stillness at a moment's notice.---That is such a perfect description of Jack. I wish I'd written that. Excellent!!
Their cute banter about what she's wearing tomorrow has me grinning like a total fool. I love her teasing him and him liking it. I love how he knows she's actually not gonna wake him up for two or three hours. They're both so selfless it kills me!
Anyway, I loved this! Thanks for sharing!