Um. I'm really having a hard time with the words since last night, so forgive me if I make no sense. But there is nothing about this I do not love, save of course watching Jack deteriorate even further. I honestly can't decide whether I'm up to watching him slowly lose his mind, even though it would make for fantastic drama.
However, you write it amazingly, and of course the shipper side of me just broke in all the places where you had him thinking for a second that he was back in China and then remembering that it was actually Renee, that he could trust her. AUGH SHOW!
This also killed me: "It was hard to believe they'd only met that morning, and already he trusted her more than almost anyone else. As much as Tony or Chloe at least. If they'd had more time to work together, if they'd known each other a few years ago...
But they didn't. Thinking about the ifs wasn't going to help."
Just. . . thank you for writing them. Completely like crack, and even after my Monday hit I never have enough.
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However, you write it amazingly, and of course the shipper side of me just broke in all the places where you had him thinking for a second that he was back in China and then remembering that it was actually Renee, that he could trust her. AUGH SHOW!
This also killed me: "It was hard to believe they'd only met that morning, and already he trusted her more than almost anyone else. As much as Tony or Chloe at least. If they'd had more time to work together, if they'd known each other a few years ago...
But they didn't. Thinking about the ifs wasn't going to help."
Just. . . thank you for writing them. Completely like crack, and even after my Monday hit I never have enough.