withherhands: (24 - Jack & Kim)
withherhands ([personal profile] withherhands) wrote in [personal profile] knitwitfics 2009-05-31 10:21 pm (UTC)

Yay! I was going for subtle but it was difficult finding a balance between making it so obvious that she should have seen it earlier, and so subtle that the reader doesn't buy it. And I didn't want to go the route of Barry beating the crap out of her, as I don't think we really saw that kind of control in S5. But yeah, subtle is definitely more difficult.

Thanks for the prompt and glad you liked it!

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